April 9 2012

Correcting Tests

HHT
-Vimy Ridge Anniversary: 95 years ago
Canadian troops made a name for themselves as they were victorious in this WW2 battle.

-Receiving blankets are needed in Africa for new born babies

-Canada won Gold at the World's Mens Curling Champi0nship- skipped by Glen Howard.

-Brandon Wheat Kings are in the 2nd round of play offs vs Edmonton Oil Kings.

-ACC Cougars Girls Basket Ball teams travel to Minneapolis on Friday, at morning. They will attend an NBA game, play basketball and shop till they drop!

-Oak Lake Community School will compete in badminton and festival this week.

-On Wednesday, OLCS students and staff will wear pink against bullying.

-100th Anniversary on Sunday of the Titanic sinking.

Long Answer:
1- need an intro.
2-supporting ideas in sentence and paragraph.
3- need a good concluding sentence.

1-Points
On decline by 1900 BCE
Why:
1- constant flooding by the Indus River and its tributaries.
-Planting of same farmland year after year, destroyed quality of land.
-Couldn't produce enough food to feed everyone
-Forests cut down for fuel and the land eroded further
-Abandoned cities in search of new land.

2-Upheaval in the Arabian Sea


-TP